Once there was a pretty little girl who was called Goldilocks, because her head was covered in golden curls.
There was three bears living in a strange cottage. Father bear, Mother bear and Baby bear. Because of there size, they had different chairs and bowl. They where to eat porridge but i was to hot so they where thinking that they could take a walk and it would cool down.
Goldilock liked to go in the wood by her self and one day she stopped for a while at a strange cottage. She locked in and said:
-Hello! Is any body here.
She heard nothing so she walked in and saw that there was standing three bowls of porridge. She tasted the biggest, but that was to hot. She tasted the middle one, but that one was to cold. Then she tasted the little bowl and i was perfect.
Then she walked in to the living rom to rest on a chair. She sat on the first, but that one was to big. She sat on the second chair but that won was to big too. So she tried the third one and it was perfect. But when sat on it, it brooked in two peaces!
She was tired so she walked up stairs and saw three beds. She lay down into the firs, but was to hard. She lay down in the second one but it was also to hard. Then she lay down in the third won and it was nice. It was so nice so she fell to sleep.
When she was sleeping the three bears came home.
-Somebody has been eating my porridge, growled the Father bear.
-Same here, said Mother bear.
-Same here, cried Baby bear.
-Somebody has been sitting in my chair, growled Father bear.
-Same here, said Mother bear.
-Same here and it’s prokend too, cried Baby bear.
-Somebody has been sleeping in my bed, growled Father bear.
-Same here, said Mother bear.
-Somebody is sleeping in my bed, cried Baby bear.
Goldilock waked up and saw the three bears. Then she ran out of the house and never returned again.
The end :D
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---there were three bears...
..their size...
..they were to eat.. it was too hot...were thinking
..there were standing...
...living room...too big...